Halsey
feedback on my terrorism in the media presentation -
. Great
choice of topic
. very wide
topic
. too much
text on the screen - no rehearsal? struggling to keep up with presentation
. not
particularily clear because of the pace : too much to get through
. clearly
plenty of good research but presentation needs much narrower focus, good lesson
for critical investigation
. what is
the argument ? does islam need to be the focus ? perhaps aim for one type of
media
.
presentation improves in terms of delivery but putting a youtube URL on screen
does not really help us in an ignite presentation - we cant see it !.
Self
assessment
Overall, I
believe my presentation went well because I had a clear focus on my question
and argued both sides of my question as well. Moreover, my research helped me a lot with my presentation
as I included real life stories which could be used as evidence in my critical investigation research , Furthermore, the reason why I chose to
investigate this topic is because I have an interest in terrorism and how the media portrays terrorism therefore
I wanted to focus on the way terrorism is portrayed in the media, however For my critical investigation I will need to narror the topic and focus on one topic which in this case will be 'the representation of muslims in the news'.
